Saturday, February 22, 2025

Dion - Chapter One is Done. (and yes, it's copyrighted because I just published it)

 Chapter One

 (* mistakes may still be lurking )

Elle Finlay’s dark eyes narrowed behind her stern gaze, scanning Judy Marchmont’s face for any signs of deceit. “A prop? That looks awfully real to me,” she remarked, her arms folded firmly over themselves. Elle’s voice was low but even, betraying no emotion except perhaps a hint of skepticism. The whole situation reeked of ingenuity; something was very wrong, and it wasn’t just the fact that the headless body of a yet-to-be-identified community play participant lay bleeding at stage left; its head being left exactly where it had rolled after being unceremoniously severed during what Judy Marchmont was calling a “freak accident.”

            Elle took a step closer to Judy, her tall frame towering over the stage manager. “And why on earth would anyone go to such drastic lengths to create a fake execution for a play? What kind of people do you have working for you, Judy? Where did you get the ‘prop,’ don’t tell me this was the first time someone decided to try it out to see if it really worked. You know they have lettuce for that sort of thing!” Elle’s voice rose slightly while emphasizing what she believed was necessary to point out. “How do we explain the blood? The body? Who the hell is he anyway? I don’t even recognize him. He’s too old to be one of the students, and the only teachers or school staff involved were women, so far as I knew anyway.” She asked.

            When Marchmont’s eyes met those of the Deputy Mayor, her silence filled the room instantly. Several pregnant seconds of dormancy passed before she answered. “He…he is my husband; my husband David.” She said. “You’re absolutely right; we had tested it on the foam rubber pumpkins we found in the back as well as with a head of cabbage, not lettuce. In every case, the blade remained in place, where it should be; it didn’t…it didn’t push past the safety nub. God knows why it did this time; I told him I didn’t think it was a good idea. He’s…you know how he is; he was insistent! He all but dared…he pushed me.  He told me it was safe, Elle; I believed him. He made it! He would know.”

            Elle’s hand unconsciously clenched into a fist at her side, her body tense and ready for action. She was far from the type who backed down easily and wouldn’t start now. “You called the police, haven’t you? I mean, you called me, of course, but please tell me you’ve called the police!” Her words biting, each syllable laced with disbelief and anger. Despite the chaos this would cause, she remained laser-focused on Judy, waiting for her answer, hoping it would make sense.

            At Judy’s revelation, Elle’s expression softened slightly. She could see the genuine fear and confusion, perhaps even regret, flooding over her old friend’s face, and her heart ached for her. However, she couldn’t let her guard down completely until she knew the full truth. Elle’s mind repeatedly rolled the words “my husband” as she processed the scene, instructing the woman not to touch anything. “Leave it exactly as it is. Don’t go near the head, don’t move. Stay exactly where you are until the police arrive.” Dialing 9-1-1, Elle’s fingers shook, but she managed to connect the digits and place a calm, if not too calm, report into her phone, addressing the very real need for both police and an ambulance forthwith. “The man is dead; there is no need for sirens; just hurry, please.” She stated as she ended the call.

            “I do understand your concern, Judy,” Elle said, her voice still strong enough to show courage at that most bizarre moment. “But we can’t rule anything out yet. When the police arrive, don’t lie, don’t try to make up something, don’t hide anything, nothing will do you more harm than to try and say it was unavoidable; tell the truth and trust the system.” She told her, thinking that it wasn’t necessarily the truth that she was doling out, but at least she could comfort herself in knowing she had seen Marchmont backstage when she heard the blade fall.

            Elle paused, taking in the sight of the destroyed stage and the panicked stagehands behind the curtains where she had purposely told them all to stay. “Lock that door, Michael! No one leaves! The police will probably come through the front door, but we don’t need anyone making an exit before they arrive.” She told one of the crew, a lack-lustered youth in his later teens. Glancing back toward her, Michael Bower informed her and everyone else that the door had been left open to let in some air. With the stage having been locked up for several months before their rehearsals, it needed an airing; he couldn’t be positive that someone or more than just one person had already left through the backstage door.

            Turning to address the group gathered on one side of the stage, her gaze hardened again. “I want everyone to stay exactly where they are. The police must take your statements even if you don’t think you have anything to say to them. If any of you know who did this, please don’t make up a story to be in the papers or something; just be as honest as you can be, and by God and all things Holy, do not go near that contraption again! It is absolutely off limits to everyone; it will likely be firewood by morning!” her words carried throughout the hall just as the sirens of the police cars could be heard approaching the hall's front entrance.

            Putting an older woman from the school in charge, asking her to stand in front of the others, not allowing anyone to move, Elle walked off the side of the stage, making her way through the auditorium to the hallway leading to the entrance of the hall to meet the police. As she strode off, her long legs ate up the distance, and she disappeared into the blackness of the entertainment hall. Before reaching the doors, she called back again to ask for the lights to be switched on; someone had to move to make it happen, but at least she would know where they were.

            Elle’s mind raced with possibilities. If this was indeed just an accident, she wanted to find out what caused the malfunction in the guillotine.  Perhaps it worked perfectly with stage props like lettuce and the foam pumpkins, but when David’s full weight was on the thing, it could have triggered the blade to bypass the safety nub and fall further than it ever had when he had tested it. This made physical sense to her, her mind turning rapidly during the few seconds it took to reach the uniformed officers waiting for her at the locked front doors. 

    “Good afternoon, officers; I am Deputy Mayor Rachelle Finlay, managing the community outlet. We’re putting on an original play written by one of our students, the winner, in fact, of the school’s yearly writing contest. It’s something we have done for years. Believe it or not, it saves the community thousands of dollars in royalty payments.” Her words faded quickly as she realized how stupid she must sound explaining the play’s financial valuation at this time. 

            “I’m sorry, I’m just not completely sure I’ve lost my head on….oh God, I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to say that.” She stopped immediately, faced the two men before her, and asked them if they had been told what they would see. “Has anyone told you what happened? I don’t want you to get in there and be surprised. A man has been killed; we don’t know the mode, but we know the method. He has been beheaded by what was supposed to be a harmless prop, a prop he himself made for the play. We don’t know if he was testing it or if someone else was doing so. I’ve asked the crew and stage actors to remain exactly where they are. They are backstage behind the curtain at stage right.” Elle immediately realized she needed to explain that stage right was, in fact, on one’s left as they entered the room.

            As the first officers entered the hall, Elle melted inside herself. Noticing another set of police officers, both women, this time had made their way to the front doors as well. Giving the first responders instructions on where to go, she made her way back down the tiled floor and across the foyer to greet the new uniforms. “This way,” she said, not feeling the need to try and explain as much as she had, not wanting to make a fool of herself for a second time. “I’m Deputy Mayor Rachelle Finlay; I am usually called ‘Elle.’ The others are most likely at the edge of the stage where the man’s head will be; I don’t know if you’ll want me to bring the others through the stage door and into the hall so you can question them, us so you can question all of us.” She said, allowing herself to breathe while she spoke.

            Sitting in silence, Elle phoned her boss, Mayor Thomas Barnaby, apologizing for not having called him sooner, but as she explained, it was all rather desperate, and her first duty was, of course, to maintain the scene, keeping it as pristine as it could be for the police. “When I finally managed to get the actors and crew into the hall and seated, I noticed that two of them had already left. They either did so before everyone milled around to the right side of the stage by the stands and gears, or Michael could have let them out as I was greeting the police; I could tell he wasn’t as apt to keep the scene as he needed to be. He’s a kid; he probably doesn’t watch as many cop shows as we do, Tom.” She tried to make things a bit lighter despite the dire circumstances.

            “I hope I’m wrong about this, Tom. I hope it was an accident and that Judy Marchmont didn’t want her husband dead. They’ve not had the most amicable marriage; I think we both remember the Christmas party fiasco when David Marchmont decided ten or fifteen drinks wasn’t nearly enough.” Even while she said it, she regretted having done so. Her dark eyes closed; she was trying to find a moment of peace before admitting that Judy Marchmont wouldn’t have been the only one wanting to see David Marchmont dead. “I’m just being honest, Tom. I’m just being honest.” She told him.



Photo Credit: Mickey Rogan

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